You are on the right track for sure. I thought it looked pretty good actually. I like the fact that you are staying away from sweeteners and that you are adding in oils.
Keep a tap on the veggies and try to make it three cups a day. Two cups from the salad list and 1 cup from the other list.
The second day was a little bit "iffy" as there were probably some sweetened pepperoni on the pizza and lots of salt in your menu. Watch for sugars in bacon and sausage. It was still a pretty good day Atkins wise I think.
Chicken is your protein of choice. You are going to add others right? Or it will be a bit boring.
Do you do fitday? It is a great tool (
FitDay - Free Weight Loss and Diet Journal)