Let's hear your Atkins poems! This is going to be fun!

[greedyvw]

for those of you who like reading or writing poetry...this is for you!

i will start with a small haiku

On this way of life
I'm no longer overweight
Hope I find a wife

lol corny i know, but i figured i'd @ least get it started!!! enjoy everyone and lets have some fun with this

[Eama]

I think that I shall never see
a condiment as good as ghee
poured over a boiled lobster claw.
Forget the corn and the coleslaw!

Give me butter, eggs and meat.
With a cup of veg my meal is complete.
Forget those sugar-laden things.
High fat and protein will give me wings.

I spent too much time fat and tired,
but this internet forum has me inspired.
Low-carb is my path to success
to rid myself of all this excess.


Ha ha! That was fun.

Loved the haiku! Good luck on your quest for a wife.

[Mstrubl]

I like the low carb life instead
Of macaroni & cheese and that high carb bread
give me butter and give me cream
One day I'll reach that ONEderful dream

I'll be happy and heathy
fit as a fiddle
I'll no longer carry
that tire around the middle...

[sham]

Sorry I sat for a while and tried to come up with something but nothing well if i make a poem will come back and type it in enjoying reading everyones though.Greedyvw a great thread to start lets hope more poems come pouring in.

[JohnSantos]

Bacon Bacon Bacon.
Ham eggs and cheese.
It's time for breakfast.
So serve me up a plate please.

Gonna be thin soon.
Looking hot and sleek.
I must say.
Georgiana is a cute geek.

[chinadoll]

I keep coming back but still drawing a blank on a poem. But I am enjoying the reading! Fun thread Greedy!

[sham]

I was fat
now I am thin
this low carb diet
has made me trim
I used to be tired
no energy at all
now im set again
Im not going to fall!


I hope its upto scratch I tried greedyvw for your sake.

[greedyvw]

thanks sham it was great!

[SunnySmile501]

I can do a lot of things, but writing poetry isn't one of them! Loved to read y'alls though!

[greedyvw]

my friends keep asking me about my diet
i keep telling them "it rocks and they should try it"
my friends keep telling me how good i look
i keep telling them "here read this book"
my friends asking me how i lost all that weight
i keep telling them "go to right now, its not to late
to change your habits and way of life"
Now they are the ones searcing for a wife...


i always go back and read the things i come up with and laugh. i am such a horrible writer lol